Monday, 30 March 2015

Reader



Expand Vocabulary

i know find and use interesting words.

why because


Thursday, 26 March 2015

Camp


Story telling

HE
 This is what I need to work on Using your voice to make saunds effects 
 I did good Unique and original 
 

Wednesday, 25 March 2015

I did good because it looked like a house. 

I need to get the mosquito holes 

 I 

Learning pit


What is the learning pit? The learning pit is a place where you need to learn stuff that you don't know. If I am in the learning pit I would be working really hard on my learning.
I felt challenged when I first started doing maths but I got better and better and went up heaps of levels.
My goal is to learn how to do freestyle and breathing. I have been practising.





Ta

Tuesday, 24 March 2015

Chocolate compete

Chocolate competition 

The learning pit

The learning pit is a place where you can learn saff for your learning 


What is the learning pit? The learning pit is a place where you need to learn stuff that you don't know. If I am in the learning pit I would be working really hard on my learning.
I felt challenged when I first started doing maths but I got better and better and went up heaps of levels.






My Maths


I am learning 1, 10, 100 more than and less than to 1000.
This is my goal 

Monday, 23 March 2015

My book.


This is my 1st chapter book / me and mum read it together.


Sunday, 22 March 2015

Cohen,s blog�� 1

      

WALT Inform (entertaining and persuading our audience to visit our blog)

- welcome to our blog!
- show pictures of some of your learning (butterflies etc.)
- who are you friends?
- things you like (paper planes!)
- places we like to play
- 45seconds

See here for an example

 I did well at looking at the canera.


Next time My voice needs to be louder.

Wednesday, 4 March 2015

Writing

The 

Purpose: To describe an interesting character so we can tell a story about them at the Marae stay.

WALT: Entertain (character description)

Task:

Think of a character you could write about.

Draw them.  

Introduce your character in an entertaining way.

Describe their looks.  

Describe their personality.  

I think/feel statement (Conclusion / Summary)


Criteria: I can

Self Assessment


Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)

  • use a range of verbs

Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)

  • select one or two similes

  • use onomatopoeia to show sounds

  • select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)

My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)


Learning Partner Comment

Feedback: I love the way you told his looks


Feedforward: Next time write a I think sentence.

Name:

Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done?






You need sage to save you because he has pawas listing pawas look at the listing flash out of his head 
is the grdegin of pandora box it's a daggers box it holds the bad guys secret sege has a soft side Rubin he helps people in ned by macking rainbow that's distgrat bad guys wosh uot bad guys sage is 
Coming to get you.