Thursday, 31 March 2016

Te Reo - Whakapapa

           Whaea                                                                                         kua  



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                                              Kual kor

                                                                   Mama whana koka Mama whana koka/papa           kua


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Tuesday, 15 March 2016

Writing Sample T1 The Camp Contest.

Description: I am writing to entertain. I chose to write about camp. "So he snots on me and Jack and he spits at Shaun..."  Read more to find out what happens....

Next activity at school camp is kayaking. Yay, I run to the kayak. I jump in the kayak.  I get pushed into the water. Moldy stuff comes in  my kayak. It is slimy . I never knew I could  kayak. We are playing a game. We throw the ball. You get a point... 3 2 1 GO! Jack throws the ball. I kayak over to it. I was going too fast so I  went past it. So I jumped in the slimy water and I get a point, sadly it is time to go now.



The last activity is horse riding yay. Oh I stood in horse poo. I can wash it off later. "Cohen it is your turn" said Maryanne, yay.

"Can I have Fin?" Yep, cool It is a bumpy ride and he stops for a drink. 10 mins later he is done, Time to hop off and you can feed Pepa. Pepa is my favourite horse. So I went into  his paddock and I patted him. Then me Jack and Shaun went in Pepa's paddock. If he snots on you he likes you and when he spits at you he hates you. So he snots on me and Jack and he spits at Shaun. Then it was time to go back on the bus, where I had a little nap on the way back to school.




Feedback I think next time when we write a story you should get some people or adults to help you spell the words. from Shaun ;}

Feedforword I like how you explained what activity you are doing. from Shaun

Thursday, 3 March 2016

My one word

description:first we had to chose a word my one was freindship and then Elly had to take a photo of us i got my photo taken by the bushes and when it was finshed it was to small so i put it on some paper and then it fit and it was all done i am glad that i did my one word i hope we do this again sometime soon.


feedfword i think that next time when you have a photo about a word you could put your hands a bit closer.
feedback i really like the smile on your face and you are being pashinnit in your photo 
shaun.b 

the d was hard because I fogot to put it in so I mad it so the snack is cling up the tree

camp reflection for activities

Description: we went on a trip to El Rancho. We set two goals that we wanted to achieve by the end of camp. They are down below.












Feed-forward next time you could make the photos bigger so I could read them 
 Feed-back: wow it's so cool to hear you made new friends at camp Miko


Evaluation I made lots and lots of new friends. I think everyone should get two goes at camp every year to make friends because it helped me to achieve my goal of making new friends.